K. Vale Nagle

Feral Fantasy Author

Gryphon Profile: Hatzel

One of my favorite gryphons from Eyrie who never gets any cover love is Hatzel, so I reached out to Sydney Moncrief who sometimes does concept art work for me and asked if she’d take a stab at bringing Hatzel to life.

Hatzel was the first gryphon I created after Zeph. She’s there in the second scene and serves as a calm, responsible foil for the other characters. While being a strong, smart leader is core to her character, I wanted her to visually be a more prehistoric design than most gryphons. She should be scary when she wants to look imposing.

I’d been studying wingspan lengths in living creatures to get a feel for how big an animal could be and still fly. For the pterosaur (think pterodactyl or pteronadon) Hatzegopteryx, the answer was… well, the size of a giraffe. For raptors, Haast’s eagle had a wingspan around 9 feet and hunted moa, essentially giant ostriches. To say both animals inspired Hatzel’s name is spot on.

When I first sketched Hatzel, I knew there was a jag in her beak, but it became more pronounced as I wrote. Haast’s eagle went extinct a couple hundred years ago, so that got me thinking about prehistoric birds and cats not normally used in gryphon creation. I began to wonder if I could pronounce the beak jag into something even more fierce, reminiscent of a saber-toothed tiger.

Since her coloring has always been dark, “nearly black below the canopy where the light doesn’t reach,” I was worried about comparisons with Mercedes Lackey and Larry Dixon’s Skandranon, the eponymous Black Gryphon from the famous Valdemar books. I asked Sydney to consider the cooper’s hawk (Zeph) and magpie (Xavi) gryphons of her pride and add a little hint of each, hence the white highlights.

I’ve been using the term “saberbeak” to refer to Hatzel’s gryphon species. Where a lot of the gryphon prides in Eyrie are composed of similar species—harpy eagles for Merin’s, kakapo for the Parrotface Pride, Shrikes/Caracals for the kjarr and bog prides—I wanted Hatzel’s pride to be a mix of several smaller prides that couldn’t stand on their own.

I might delve into Hatzel’s back story more in a short story one of these days if people are interested. I feel like back story in novels is fluid: I come up with something detailed for every character and use that to influence my writing of their scenes, but it’s not set in stone until I commit it to writing that other people see.

Bonus Trivia! Another design I considered for Hatzel, one that would have emphasized her size even more, used a terror bird as her front half instead of a Haast’s eagle. Unfortunately, being flightless, that gave her smaller wings. Here’s Sydney’s rendition of a smilodon + terror bird gryphon. What do you think?

2018 Gryphon Books

In 2017, I started asking everyone for what gryphon books I should be reading. Like so many gryphon fans, The Black Gryphon, The White Gryphon, and The Silver Gryphon had been a big part of my childhood. A lot of time has passed since The Black Gryphon‘s debut in 1994. In my head, I thought there might be twenty new gryphon books.

Well, you’ve sent your suggestions in, and there are a lot more than twenty. More like a hundred a fifty! (You can view them over on the Gryphon Reading List if you’re curious. If you see one you like that’s not on there, use the contact form to suggest it.)

So I started reading, and here are the ones I’ve made it through so far. I’m including a quick sentence in case it piques your interest.

Gryphons Aren’t So Great is a children’s book about a knight and a horse that’re best friends. The knight meets a gryphon and the horse is left jealous. Despite the title, I think it’s based on the premise we already know: gryphons ARE that great. Very cute.

Song of the Summer King, Skyfire, A Shard of Sun by Jess E. Owen. The Summer King Chronicles are middle grade fantasy fiction with a strong myth quality to them. The protagonist is a gryphon, there are no humans, and other characters include wolves and lions. Beautiful covers by Jennifer Miller, a favorite gryphon artist of mine.

Griffin Ranger: Crossline Plains, Griffin Ranger: The Monster Lands by Roz Gibson. Gibson is a comic artist who writes dark fiction and Griffin Ranger is no exception. These books are kick-a-puppy dark. They start in a version of Earth where humans never existed, and instead other species evolved to fill their roles. It’s a little scifi, a little noir crime fiction, a little alternative history, all dark. It includes artwork every few chapters by the author and also fan favorites like Cara Mitten.

The Gryphon Generation by Alexander Bizzell. There’s an interesting story here. When I was recovering from the last pulmonary embolism (thanks for that, APLS), I offered to do a free edit on any gryphon books until I was well enough to start back on my normal editing work. Alex was one of three authors who took me up on the offer. The Gryphon Generation is a fantasy in an urban setting—Macon, GA—where gryphons have come into being and humanity is learning to adapt to the idea of not being the only sapient species around. It’s a little slice of life, a little fantasy, and a little sports drama (gryphball). The cover is by Cyfrowa “RedIzak” Izabela, who also does two interior art pieces.

The Gryphon Rider Trilogy: Windsworn, Windswept, Windbreak by Derek Siddoway. There’s also an optional short story, “Birds of a Feather,” that I picked up from his mailing list. These are fast-paced YA epic fantasy. While Windsworn has a striking cover, seeing the red gryphon Fury on the cover of Windswept is what convinced me to buy them immediately. They took over the Mythical Creatures category at the end of 2017 and start of 2018, holding their own against the usual dragon fare.

The Eyrie Book of Gryphons by John Winkle is a combination of short stories, novelettes, and nonfiction. It has an interesting premise: alternating chapters of nonfiction, then a related fiction story that includes much of the same material.

The Book of Gryphons by Joe Nigg. This is an old, out-of-print book that has a cult following among gryphon fans. Joe Nigg has done two books that explore gryphon culture. While a critique might be that Google and Wikipedia can get you the same information, I’d argue that the author has included a lot of useful photographs and does a better job explaining the non-traditional gryphons that you’ll find on Wikipedia. My takeaway was that every culture has their own version of a gryphon, many of which aren’t just eagle + lion. I did notice a theme in my nonfiction reading, though, that might be useful. If you’re looking for a single source of the gryphon of mythology, there really isn’t one. Humans love combining animals too much. You’ll find bird-cat myths sprung up in cultures that never interacted.

Those were the highlights! I also read two other gryphon books that aren’t published yet, a few short stories like “Foaling Season,” and some articles. There’s a lot of great fiction out there. Definitely give it a go if you haven’t!

Looking forward to 2019, I plan to start with Of Gryphons & Other Monsters by Shannon McGee before trying out the Red Sword Trilogy by Michael Wallace. After that, The Griffin Mage series by Rachel Neumeir and I’ll finish up the Summer King Chronicles with the short story collection that came out in 2018.

The Beginning of the Journey

I think there’s a temptation at the start of a blog to introduce myself, but that’s what the author bio is for, isn’t it? Instead of telling you about myself directly, I thought I’d talk a little about my decision to create this pen name.

I spent a lot of time editing both fiction and technical documents in my day job. At least, I did before the latest embolism. My backgrounds are in both computer science and creative writing, so editing was a natural use of my time, but I also write literary fiction that gets published in mid-tier markets. While I love literary fiction and fantasy equally, I tended to hide my fantasy writing and send out my literary writing to be published, and I wasn’t sure why.

It was only sitting in a hospital bed, recovering from yet another embolism, that I considered taking my fantasy writing seriously. I’d written a few novels that friends and loved ones had read. I used to lead a group of writers on Saturday morning who would get together, write a short story in under an hour, then share our stories with each other. I was having a lot of fun, I just wasn’t making my work available.

Publishing is a scary place. Not necessarily literary publishing, where the stakes are low and the contracts are often kinder, but writing commercial fiction comes with low advances, a slew of gatekeepers, a lot of scams, and a host of broken dreams.

If you go the traditional route, you’re signing away the copyright to your book for your life time plus 90 years. (It’s hard to claim a book is “out of print” in the world of ebooks and print-on-demand technology to try to get your rights back.) I seem to read a new story about top agents caught embezzling money or rights every week. And we’ve all started an amazing new series just to have the publisher cancel it before it wraps up. Could I do that to my readers?

If you go the indie route… actually, I didn’t know. Literary publishing isn’t entirely traditional—there are self-published books on the list contending for the top French literary awards as I type this—but in the US, most of the appeal of literary publishing comes from book deals by prestigious publishers and short story prizes like the Pushcart and O. Henry. I had no idea what independent publishing was like or about.

One of my friends issued a challenge for me: look over what I’d read for the previous year, guess which books had been indie published and which came from the Big 5 publishers, then see if I was right. I assumed the books I’d read that were poorly written or plotted were probably indie books. One story about a killer fish had the sun rising in the west, no idea of how commas worked, and a nonsensical ending. I also assumed that Wool by Hugh Howey was self-published, as he’s famous for sailing around the world in his yacht thanks to his selfpub money.

By contrast, I’d read and listened to some Harry Potter that year on my commute. I’d also read a lot of literary fiction as part of my creative writing degree, so I assumed that was traditional. I was incorrect about a surprising number.

It turned out that you can’t just look at the publisher on Amazon to see if a book was self-published or not. Some indies show up as “Amazon Digital Services, LLC,” and they’re easy to spot. Others show up as “Chris Fox Publishing,” which we can safely assume is Chris Fox’s imprint name when he self-publishes. Others show up as Five Elements Press. Is that just Jess Owen? Or is that a small or medium press? I had to dig deeper.

And what I found was that the books I assumed were self-published were all small and medium publishing companies. There are some small and medium presses that’re striking in how good they are, but at least for that year, that bracket had the lower quality books. What’s more, I was wrong about Hugh Howey. While he self-publishes a lot of his work, the paperback edition of Wool I read was put out by St. Martin’s Press. And it wasn’t just him.

J. K. Rowling has a self-publishing imprint called Pottermore. While the paperback was put out by Scholastic, the ebook and audiobook editions I’d experienced were both self-published books. Even Virginia Woolf was part of an older self-publishing movement.

I wasn’t convinced, but I was curious. I asked around about the state of publishing and what self-publishing was, but the literary fiction world isn’t the place to ask those questions. From working at a high tier literary magazine, we’d had a set of essays printed both in a book and in the magazine, so I looked up one of the authors who spoke about publishing and read more of her work (Jane Friedman). From there, I started reaching out to commercial authors of all sorts.

I was touched by how many were willing to answer some questions for me. What I found through resources like Passive Voice, Author Earnings, author interviews, blogs, and conventions was that the appeal of self-publishing was control and income. The downside was hard work and no promises.

What many commercial authors do now is they do a little of both. Brandon Sanderson, in his BYU course, suggests writing three novels a year—two for self-publishing, one to shop around to publishers. While David Farland is famously pro-traditional publishing, he suggests a hybrid approach and mentioned that his income from self-publishing was sometimes 3/4ths of his overall writing income. A lot of traditional authors decided to go purely indie: Kristine Kathryn Rusch, Dean Wesley Smith.

But what really stuck in my brain was something Hugh Howey said. He said millionaires on yachts made for good headlines, but he started Author Earnings to show that most authors who were making a livable income were doing it as indies now.

I don’t know if that’s true. The promise of working hard, working smart, putting books out, and making a living from writing alone feels like it could be a dream. I could only think of one way to test and see if there was any truth to it.

I started a fantasy pen name.

I said earlier that independent publishing offers two advantages: control and income. I ran my plans through some smart independent authors making a living at it, so we’ll see if it becomes possible to write full time. That’s the income half of the equation.

For control, this is the fantasy series I want to exist in the world. These are the books where, if a publisher cancelled the series on book 3, I’d have been left devastated. I’ll probably still try out traditional publishing on this pen name, too, and take a hybrid approach. Here at the start, though, I’ve gathered my professional editors and cover artists and I’m going to give indie a try.

My promise is this: If you want a series of six creature fantasy books with beautiful gryphon covers, I’ll make that happen in ebook, paperback, and hardcover. They’ll be professionally edited. I’ll give you my best as a fantasy writer. I’ll do my best to follow the best practices. And after the end of the series, we’ll see where to go from there, shall we?

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